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Edit, rewrite and other activities

10 Jan

President Kennedy stated in his famous speech in Houston about going to the moon, we choose to go, not because it’s easy, but because it’s hard.

We choose to go to the moon. We choose to go to the moon in this decade and do the other things, not because they are easy, but because they are hard, because that goal will serve to organize and measure the best of our energies and skills, because that challenge is one that we are willing to accept, one we are unwilling to postpone, and one which we intend to win, and the others, too.

Well, let me say, editing, rewriting and fixing plot holes in a draft novel is anything but easy. While it’s fun, challenging and downright time consuming, it’s not an easy task. In fact, I’m beginning to understand, it’s much harder than the original writing process. Sitting down with a blank sheet and banging out a scene is fun. A lot of fun. Making up action, peoples reaction, dialog and plot thrills is one of the reasons I like to write. I like to tell a story.

Editing grammar errors and technical sentence structure is the easy part. So, when I say edit, I’m referring to content. Reworking specific word meaning, emphasis and trying to work through showing scene, not just telling about it, is probably the most difficult part. Restating things, using the same words and over use of phrases is a challenge for sure.

Plot holes, another major concern, is another major time consuming effort. When changes to a scene greatly affect the over all plot direction, authors have to go through every referencing scene to insure consistency and accuracy. When I’ve made serious changes to a name, new knowledge or some kind of reveal, cycling back through the previous sections is tedious. Seriously, it’s extremely time consuming, and I’m a huge software user with search and replace features.

Rewriting, while fun, is also difficult to restrain. After reading a rough draft, authors have to practice self-restraint from completely rewriting the entire manuscript. While some scenes need some major attention, the entire manuscript is not necessarily up for grabs. Several scenes are “Okay” in their original form. However, since I’ve slept a bit and have had lots of time to think about the action in a scene, I find myself wiping the entire scene and completely rewriting it from scratch. While I could just rewrite paragraphs and sentences, sometimes it’s just easier to redo the whole thing. Not for every chapter, but for some, it’s the way to go.

Bottom line, rewriting and rereading ad nausea can drive a writer to the brink of chucking the whole thing, start over or just walk away from the project completely. When in the middle of it all, it’s easy to just switch off the computer, drink some tea and watch TV.

I choose to write a novel, not because it’s easy, but because it’s hard, the goal will serve to organize and measure skills and energies within myself.

 
 

Novel, Stitched, coming along nicely

17 Nov

It’s amazing how quickly forty-five mintes can go by. That’s approximately how much time I have in the morning on the bus ride in. Since I grab the 6:12AM bus out of Niwot, I find it’s quiet and most of the other riders are snoozing or reading. So, I fire up my laptop and crank on my novel.

While I’m writing to accomplish the National Novel Writers Month goal of 50,000 words in 30 days, I’m also trying to put the story down on paper. I’ve discovered that adjusting my process of pre-planning is making a huge difference. Even though I’m adjusting as I go, having a generally sound plan ahead of time makes the writing sessions go by quickly.

I recently wrote a profile bio with humor, but after re-examining the words, I find, yeah, that’s me. Here’s an edited version.

Hi, I’m Shane…

… “Hi Shane!” -the group shouts in unison. Everyone is sitting around in a circle of cold plastic chairs in the basement of the local Odd-Fellows Hall.

I’m a “write-aholic” – I’ve recently admitted this and am now in therapy, (as in, I’m preparing for NaNoWriMo), I’m writing short stories when I can and more importantly, I’m in the middle of writing a full fledged novel, again (Fourth one, actually).

This addiction hasn’t cost me a thing. My family is intact, I am still happily married, have a wonderful son, the job pays the bills and frankly, I live a rather boring life. The ONLY thing my addiction has cost me is sleep and time. It has kept me up at night conjuring up, the worst ways to kill people, dreaming up horrible evil characters, designing character conflict, formulating ways to ratchet up the tension and of course, make the hero likable, which has made me wonder about my own sanity. But, all-in-all, it’s not cost me a job, family or friends, so I’m glad about that.

It all started when I was a young story teller of 9 or 10 fibbing to my mom about giants on the roof, or climbing the tallest tree watching pterodactyls fly over head. I’ve been known by more recent stories as an adult about flying all over the country as a covert operative. The truth is/was of course, there was no giants on the roof, obviously pterodactyls are extinct and I was working as a computer/server technician, not an operative.

Often times I embellish stories that really happened. (My wife says take everything I say and cut it in half, a third or even quarters). I progressed to completely making things up, like the covert operative story, which when I was a road-warrior for a printing company, I would pretend to be someone else, harmless stuff. (This never led to anything nefarious, just made up stories to shut the chatty-cathy up next to me on a plane.)

Since, I’ve been known to tell a tall tale or two I decided to start writing. There was that ten year period where a “baby” was involved, but that’s another story. So now, I write all kinds of things, short stories, whimsical stories, non-fiction (Although I haven’t done as much as I’ve been encouraged) and I am often accused of writing mini-novels in my emails to coworkers. (I’m sure they all groan when they see my name at the top of the header.)

That leads me to my current project. I’m preparing a thriller set in Colorado with all kinds of twists and turns. Characters, evil plot, main plot and step sheets have all been prepared and I officially started on November 1st. As I write this particular blog, I’m about half way through the 50,000 goal, but only about a third through the plot.

… I’m Shane and I AM a write-aholic!

 
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Crazy schedule

12 Nov

With all that’s going on, my schedule is crazy. Yeah, i know, so is everyone’s right. Well, agreed, but with the added pressure of work, long commute and doing chores on the weekend, I’ve added even more to plate.

NaNoWriMo is a challenge. Staring November first, I began to try and bang out a novel of 50,000 words in one month. So did a lot of people, but I’m going to do it if it kills me. Right now, I’ve only made a dent at 12,800 words, give or take. However, I have a couple of weekends and the holidays in the mix. Originally, I wanted to work on it at night, but after 12 hour days, I just run out of steam. So, the 12K words I’ve done so far, have been banged out on the bus, lunch and when I can sneak in a few minutes before crashing for the night.

The good news, I spent the weeks prior to this month working on characters, plot lines, premise, scenes and building the step sheet. So, my writing time isn’t spent trying to figure out what to write, just how to write the scenes, what to bring out and what to explore.

So far, it’s working pretty well, if I could just find the time.

Crazy schedule and all!

 
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NaNoWriMo

21 Oct

National Novel Writers MOnth

National Novel Writers Month – aka: NaNoWriMo, is in November. Anyone who’s ever wanted to write a novel can participate. The core requirements are to start from scratch, write as fast as you can and finish 50,000 word novel in 30 days. Sounds easy huh? We’ll see.

Currently, in between my day job demands, family demands and pending trip to Texas, (for two, yes TWO, turkey dinners) I’m also preparing for November by planning out characters, plot(s) and premise ahead of time. I’ve read about this endeavor over the past few years, but have been reluctant in the past to participate. Just wasn’t ready.

This year, I’m going to be ready and hopefully bang out a decent novel. While not polished in any form, here’s the synopsis:

“Burned out FBI Agent, Anna Duvrayne, after loosing her partner, getting shot and nearly loosing her job, looks for solace at her inherited mountain home in southern Colorado left by her estranged, now deceased, father. She discovers secrets he kept journaled, learns about his past and gets entangled with sinister activities in the quant mountain town of Lake City Colorado. Tourist are going missing, often unnoticed and undetected, until the son of a retired couple comes looking. Anna helps put the pieces together uncovering more than she bargains as her father speaks from the grave.”

I have some twisted ideas cooking with this one and no, it’s not a ghost story. 8-)

 
 

Short Stories; it’s a twisted start.

30 Sep

Alfred Hitchcock

I’ve been a busy beaver the past three weeks during my free time. While I have more to go, I’ve put the finishing touches on the first three stories of an anthology I’m working.

Twisted mini-thrillers:

The Jump: Twins with a sorted past who do not like each other learn about their inheritance and celebrate their twenty fifth birthday in style. Fait hands them more than they bargain while freindships prevail in this short story about how brothers treat each other when money, power and sex is involved.

Just Noise: Ever wonder about the lonely cry of a trains whistle in the middle of the night and the engineers behind the scenes? When multiple train engineers disappear suddenly, a local sheriff and his deputies rush against time following strange clues to their where abouts before the FBI swoops in and steals their thunder only to discover, they are all lost as ever.

Invaded: When a wealthy families home is invaded in the middle of dinner, things take a turn for the worse as the intruders play ruthless games with family members, questioning everyones loyalty and family differences.

Next; I have “The Jump” being critiqued this weekend at the Boulder Fiction Writers meetup. Next, I plan on submitting each them for publication in one of several magazines. Wish me luck.